Pink Petals Poem by sekharan pookkat

Pink Petals

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Pink petals of roses
So soft and smells pure Orlando
Once inhaled as such keeps
In our nasals afresh.

The three H's
Home, Heaven and Hell
Are so sweet and feels
Different emotions in you.

Sins at home
will not be tolerated
and hatred punished
And compromise honored.

No entry to heaven
without testing
will be scared and
cared by virtues.

All entries to hell
are open and dared
by common deeds between birth
and death on the earth.

Pink petals of roses
So soft and smells pure Orlando
Once inhaled as such keeps
In our nasals afresh.

Monday, June 1, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: birth
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Life is a tale between birth and death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 01 June 2015

No entry to heaven without testing will be scared and cared by virtues. Really, no virtues, no heaven. Nicely and aptly envisioned. Groovy collocation. Enjoyed. Many thanks. ......10

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Sekharan Pookkat 01 June 2015

thank you very much - your comments are highly appreciated and valued- read my other poems too

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