Pilgrims Of The Soul* Poem by C. P. Sharma

Pilgrims Of The Soul*

Rating: 5.0


Pilgrims of the soul

Poets' journey through body to soul,
It has no scope for a double role;
A common platform PH provides,
All colors and creeds in One confide.

All of us are on a pilgrimage,
Different countries, variant age;
We all come here with our tales,
One another with bliss regale.

We are the pilgrims of the soul,
In One Soul our bodies roll.

* A rejoinder to Meggie Gultiano’s MY POETIC JOURNEY.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh T A 24 August 2009

This journey of the pilgrims is sure to spiritual bliss! Nice!

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Sandra Fowler 24 August 2009

What a wonderful response to Meggie's poem. Your conclusion is inspired indeed. 10/10. Friends at poemhunter, Sandra

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Lynda Robson 27 August 2009

I like the expression 'in one soul, our bodies roll' well composed 10 Lynda xx

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Obed Souza 27 August 2009

Wonderful! Our souls find rests only in the love of God... It is trapped in the cage of existence, awaiting for the fresh air of eternity... 10!

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Howard Kern 28 August 2009

I must agree the journey is so much more than the out come. A place where we all try and meet on level ground that starts with a blank page, and try to connect to others! 10

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Patrick A. Martin 07 September 2009

A ship has many crew members but they all have one duty the welbeing of the ship. I like this poem very much and it's a pleasure to sail through life sharing the journey with you Sharma Ji.10

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Vaibhav Pandey 06 September 2009

This is indeed a remarkable poem sir.....the best tribute to the PH family...10

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Alison Cassidy 05 September 2009

Your express the 'essence' of our PoemHunter family poetically and insightfully in this fascinating poem. Your final couplet is particularly eloquent. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sarwar Chowdhury 03 September 2009

great......remarkable poem! fine wording! enlightening verses! 10+

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 02 September 2009

profound verses...a fantastic platform ph has provided us..hope the world could be so

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C. P. Sharma

C. P. Sharma

Bissau, Rajasthan
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