Rookie - 191 Points (07 august 1996 / samastipur)

Piece Of Memory - Poem by JENIE FRANKSAY

You may refuse,
but this is the truth.

i was a dream,
that you dreamt.
i am a memory,
which you want to forget.

yes, times 've changed,
and my definition too,
may i tell,
or you'll do? ?

i'm now, a piece of memory,
crashed out of your broken dreams,
pricking your eyes,
which now showers streams...

Comments about Piece Of Memory by JENIE FRANKSAY

  • Rookie Prince Fuo (3/15/2014 4:58:00 AM)

    Crisp and creative, your poem made my day.there is beauty in between the lines. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 306 Points Siyabonga A Nxumalo (10/26/2013 1:04:00 PM)

    Excellently penned poem dear Jenie, some memories never fade and always makes one's heart heavy. Mostly we pretend as if we don't care but deep down in our hearts we feel the strong and make new memories.... (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,111 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (10/20/2013 11:15:00 AM)

    A super poem nicely rhymed! Enjoyd a memo like muse. Pls coment my latest poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,120 Points Heather Wilkins (10/20/2013 10:59:00 AM)

    A lovely write Jenie Everything in life becomes a memory. keep on writing. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,266 Points Vishal Sharma (10/19/2013 5:07:00 AM)

    nice write..keep penning (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,267 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (10/19/2013 3:30:00 AM)

    perfectly penned! separation leaves only tearful memories. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 16, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 24, 2013

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