Piece Of Memory Poem by JENIE FRANKSAY

Piece Of Memory

Rating: 5.0


You may refuse,
but this is the truth.

i was a dream,
that you dreamt.
i am a memory,
which you want to forget.

yes, times 've changed,
and my definition too,
may i tell,
or you'll do? ?

i'm now, a piece of memory,
crashed out of your broken dreams,
pricking your eyes,
which now showers streams...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Siyabonga A Nxumalo 26 October 2013

Excellently penned poem dear Jenie, some memories never fade and always makes one's heart heavy. Mostly we pretend as if we don't care but deep down in our hearts we feel the pain...be strong and make new memories....

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 20 October 2013

A super poem nicely rhymed! Enjoyd a memo like muse. Pls coment my latest poem.

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Heather Wilkins 20 October 2013

A lovely write Jenie Everything in life becomes a memory. keep on writing.

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Vishal Sharma 19 October 2013

nice write..keep penning

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 19 October 2013

perfectly penned! separation leaves only tearful memories.

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