Phu Quoc Poem by Jordan Crider

Phu Quoc



lets head down to the beach
we can watch the waves wash sand from our feet
stare at the lights on the horizon
are they ships that are leaving or just arivin'

lets go for a walk
we can smile and have a long talk
remember the wonderful things that happened today
moon seems brighter and waves wash the worries away

lets go 12 hours back
remember the buss ride remember the shacks
sweat a little and laugh
is it really time to go i dont want that bungalow

let me hang my feet over the edge
here in Cua Can its water under the bridge
5 more minutes please
to soak it in before i have to leave.
i have to leave.
i have to leave.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jordan Salinas 07 May 2009

Jordan... Come back to class. We need your presence

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Aylissa Ramirez 01 May 2009

i really like the slant rhyme

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CoreyLeigh Mason 28 April 2009

The water arts really makes me like it. It's sounds like an old 50's song.

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Ashleigh Michaud 15 April 2009

wow! that was pretty cool ;)

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