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C. P. Sharma (11/11/2008 10:58:00 AM)
I loved these lines,
Your cheeks burn with another’s touch,
Your lips gleam with her scarlet kiss –
Or do I dread the past so much
That fearful eyes imagine this?
Perfect meter and profound thoght. |
Chitra Lele (8/28/2008 8:53:00 AM)
nice poem! well woven 10+ |
Ivan Donn Carswell (8/7/2008 10:24:00 PM)
This is the mixing of past and present intrigue and analogy in a cleverly paced, rythmic & metrically sustained homologue for what good poetry is supposed to be. Rgds, Ivan |
Kesav Easwaran (8/6/2008 6:58:00 AM)
the answer to last line question is superbly pre loaded in the second 'line shot' of the poem cam...clever photo'graphic' technique, flora...poor soul! couldn't escape from your exposing power! io+ |
Helen Unknown (8/4/2008 3:59:00 AM)
What a very clever poem and yes it resonates. Isn't it strange that we can drive ourselves crazy with these thoughts of who was the one making the shutter click! Wonderful penning dear F. HG: -) xx |
Fay Slimm (8/2/2008 4:20:00 AM)
Flora what an observaional poem you so cleverly wrought. I give it a well deserved ten. Greetings from Fay in Cornwall. |
Onelia A (7/30/2008 1:08:00 PM)
Thank you, Flora! You are often a wonderful lyrical voice, an announcer of my own feminine and human nature. It is a balm to read own thoughts, which you do not dare to express, but expressed by someone else in a beautiful poetical manner. I am a Floraphile, no doubts! |
Saint Cynosure (7/30/2008 9:53:00 AM)
This is so good, such a great read.
I am glade that I found it. |
Donall Dempsey (7/29/2008 8:57:00 AM)
Ahhh. Flora this is perfect. You have perfected your perfection. So telling in its detail...so chillingly real.
love Donall Donall |
Lynda Robson (7/29/2008 8:00:00 AM)
Brilliant Flora, this poem reminds me of the song I Know Him So Well, where two women are talking about the same man, but see him in different ways,
*10*
Lynda xx |
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