Phoenix Poem by Vidi Writes

Phoenix

Rating: 5.0


I wonder why a trustworthy
Seldom trusted!

Is a trusty so enigmatic to you?
Is his honesty a zoo bird?
Is the Candor so tough to trail?
Is his truth a stodgy and you discard?
Is his glory, unbearable to the sight?
Is it your inferiority put on the desk?
Is it the fear, you can never pursue?
Is it you don’t have truth inside to trust upon?

You try to crush him, so the rest are equal! !
He is a phoenix, ever emerges from his own ashes.

Bear him
Follow him
Learn from him
Honor him
Savor the shower of his monsoon.
Dark sky dares to decorate
Stars and Moons on its surface
Else, could anyone see those shines on the sky?

-vidi-
04-01-09

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vaibhav Pandey 05 January 2009

wow...... I truly loved it. 10

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Mamta Agarwal 06 January 2009

truth and honesty, rare qualities suspicion and doubt abound in reality. i really liked the last three lines.well Vidi, how many can look at themselves with honesty, so where does trust and truth stand a chance, great thought of an enquiring mind, perplexed.so good to read yoy after a long haitus10 happy new year mamta

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 10 January 2009

A phoenix from Hell emerged in Heaven.Nothin is impossible except death! !

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Subbaraman N V 10 January 2009

What a great message to the suffocating society! Great write Congrats!

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 10 January 2009

Beautiful and symbolic use of the myth of Phoenix, the mythological bird. In continuity and resurrection of life there is a rare chance of any change in term of trust and honesty.......A good piece of write Vidi and 10 for you.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 18 January 2009

Ahhh, the proverbial Rise of the Phoenix....This is beautifully wrtitten young lady, with an eloquence of pomp, prowess, and poeticmajesty, as well as it's inveterated philosophic underpinnings...I like it...It sparkles...as you do...and will continue to! F j R 2009

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Rani Turton 15 January 2009

A lot of food for thought, as usual, Vidi. Thanks.

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Deepti Agarwal 14 January 2009

only when the soul comes alive..... lovely one...

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rohit sapra 14 January 2009

This is a very nice poem which talks about characteristics which are unidentified in a person as the qualities which are to be appreciated are seldom appreciated in this worldly world where goodness is turning to be rarest of rare qualities.

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Chitra - 13 January 2009

these words are alimentation for the soul the essence of truth well expressed

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