Ph: Love: If I Kissed It Poem by Brian Johnston

Ph: Love: If I Kissed It

Rating: 5.0


If I kissed it, would that make it better?
Are you needing much more than a friend?
Would it help if I held you so deep in my love
That your 'breath fears' would fade in the end?

Let me see the dark places you're hurting,
'Lay on hands' where you feel there's a void,
Whisper, 'Shh, ' to the sources of noise in your life,
'Guard your back' as you work through annoyed!

Or is booster shot all that is needed?
Will your day be OK on your own?
Are you looking to share a new friend that you've made,
Me to ask 'How's your day? ' on the phone?

All these things Love, are yours for the asking!
Hidden things too, that I've yet to give,
There's no firm expiration date that I control
Long as 'I'm on the street where you live! '

Glad to sacrifice life for love's meaning,
If the purchase costs me only time,
It seems you are the heart of the world's poetry,
And the word I am hoping to rhyme.

When you're gone, I can get so impatient,
It's like somehow life's rhythm is missed,
If this simplest of verses can bring you some joy
Then smile twice, for you just have been kissed!

Brian Johnston
March 1,2017

Wednesday, March 1, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 11 March 2017

Glad to sacrifice life for love's meaning, If the purchase costs me only time, The entire poem is Beautiful Brian! I smile twice! A big 10

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Bri Edwards 02 March 2017

though this is a revision of the poem you sent me, here is the comment i prepared for the other version; is the other version in your list, i wonder; i'm SURE it is! ! ! maybe i'll look for it. ====================================== favorite stanza/lines: When you're gone, I can get so impatient, It's like somehow life's rhythm is missed, If this simplest of verses can bring you some joy Then smile twice, for you just have been kissed! .................i 'love' it! ! ! ! ! VERY nice. i'm don't know if i understand it completely, but i object to none of this. perhaps one of my favorite of yours, though i'd rather it were NOT a 'love poem'. ha ha. i'll use this text, AFTER SOME EDITING, in my/our March showcase..........in ITS ENTIRETY! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! and..... to....... . MyPoemList! bri :) thanks.

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