Stanzas One, Two, Three And Growing
There was "She Played the Harp"(1) , when I truly was young,
"Ode to Verde Lee Allen"(2) , a stop on a rung,
Loving women has always been easy for me,
For their beauty's not found just in eye of beholder
Even boys with weak eyes don't need glasses to see
Their humility shining each day they get older.
Where humility's lacking man struggles with fate,
Overconfidence means that you don't acclimate
It's not really a question of "born smarts" or "brawn, "
More that Nature's corrections are seen as God's feedback,
That your life is still open, you haven't withdrawn,
And in love there is warmth that sustains you through setback.
And it's not just in loving a woman you grow,
Sometimes love's greatest gift might be letting her go!
Is there dream that she has you can't see as a goal
Or a burden relationship puts on your nature?
Is it selfishness that you respect your own soul,
Or that you can find value in her new adventure?
Going Beyond Four
Many men find that failure creeps past each new door,
For maturity slows pretty close to age four.
A man's passion to be right, to win, may not serve!
Must your bad dreams cry "Uncle" or end with a whimper?
Does your stiff upper lip suggest you might lack nerve?
Do you go for a smile or just settle for simper?
Are you faking success when you could have been real,
Maybe better to stay with how you really feel?
Is it possible you've become tool of your press,
Being right is a stress that can make a man weaker,
It's a terrible burden, the need to impress!
And the "KISS"(3) principle might help you be a seeker.
Brian Johnston
October 23,2016
Poet's Notes:
(1) 'She Played the Harp' and
(2) 'Ode to Verde Lee Allen' are fun poems in this collection honoring two of my grade school love interests. : -)
(3) The "KISS Principle" suggests that the wise "keep it simple! "
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Fantastic poem. Very educative words arranged in beautiful style. And it's not just in loving a woman you grow Sometimes love's greatest gift might be letting her go Perhaps dream that she has you can't see as a goal Or a burden relationship puts on your nature Is it selfishness that you respect your own soul Or that you can find solace in her new adventure? I like this stanza because of the advise and the truth it reveals. There are many a time that society exerts so much pressure on us, to the extent that we get no room to make choice that satisfies our hearts, but are compelled to make decisions to impress people around us. Especially when it come to choosing between those we love and those society see as befitting us. I am particularly relieved that sometimes, letting go is also a means of expressing our love to others. Indeed, only a man of Brian's age will know this. ha! (JOKe) Thou the decision may be difficult to make, I believe its still better to be real than to pretend to be who you are not. Very inspiring and educative poem. Great poem.....keep writing sir!