Petals In A Poem's Fold Poem by Musfiq us shaleheen

Petals In A Poem's Fold

Rating: 5.0


Love has gone so far
She said I am no more for you
But what moves into my heart
That can't sale through online cart

Once I bought a rose by an ode
That faded early on next Sunday
Plucked the petals on my hold
Perched in a page of poem's fold -


@Musfiq us shaleheen
Dhaka,12th July,2014

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
keep the love in safe...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 25 July 2014

The custom of putting a flower in a book as a reminder of some important event or person was a custom in my country but no longer. First paperback books and then the media changed the custom - people no longer have libraries of books in their homes! I remember finding flowers, dry and brittle, which had cracked the binding of books, but they always seemed magical to me, as your poem sensitively relates.Your poem is sad, but I think sadness is a marvelous preservative for memories - sadness shows how truly important something is to us even if we cannot fully possess it but only admire it from a distance. Your poems show you fully grasp this truth.

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Hazel Durham 13 July 2014

Preserving your love for her forever, delicate, subtle and serene write!

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 13 July 2014

A sad looking love story beautifully wrapped in to few lines. Great talent, you displayed. Please keep it up.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 12 July 2014

Your poem seems to hold the petals preserving them. Thank you.

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Petals preserved in poem's fold as reminiscence of nostalgic moments bitter or sweet...........Musfiq......... nicely composed......

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Musfiq us shaleheen

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Khulna, Bangladesh
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