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Musfiq us shaleheen

Rookie - 546 Points (31st, December,1970 / Khulna, Bangladesh)

Petals In A Poem's Fold


Love has gone so far
She said I am no more for you
But what moves into my heart
That can't sale through online cart

Once I bought a rose by an ode
That faded early on next Sunday
Plucked the petals on my hold
Perched in a page of poem's fold -


@Musfiq us shaleheen
Dhaka,12th July,2014

Submitted: Friday, July 11, 2014
Edited: Saturday, July 12, 2014

Topic(s): love


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  • Veteran Poet - 4,340 Points Daniel Brick (7/25/2014 5:14:00 AM)

    The custom of putting a flower in a book as a reminder of some important event or person was a custom in my country but no longer.
    First paperback books and then the media changed the custom - people no longer have libraries of books in their homes! I remember finding flowers, dry and brittle, which had cracked the binding of books, but they always seemed magical to me, as your poem sensitively relates.Your poem is sad, but I think sadness is a marvelous preservative for memories - sadness shows how truly important something is to us even if we cannot fully possess it but only admire it from a distance. Your poems show you fully grasp this truth. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,784 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (7/12/2014 10:07:00 AM)

    Petals preserved in poem's fold as reminiscence of nostalgic moments bitter or sweet...........Musfiq.........
    nicely composed...... (Report) Reply

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