Petals Poem by Bhaswat Chakraborty

Petals

Rating: 5.0


One.

I am a little petal of hue and smell
I am gorgeous you can tell
Tremble do I with a heart so blithe
And dance so good with a shank so lithe

Two.

I woke up in the sun so bright
At the smell of rays o’ light
Could my stalk not hold me down
I spurt to wear my rightful crown

Three.

We love the buzz of mystic bee
An ascetic lost in playful glee
Lo, how he loses his heart in us
Try that you too hey gloomy gus!

Four.

Blossom I am in the hey days
Big and bountiful spread as blaze
My glamour lights up the environs dull
A band of mirth breaks laze and lull

Five

I have admissions but a few
I can take a sun or gale anew
From the rough touch I can trot
I can face honey hunters a lot
(But) I do bend by the weight of dew
I do shake near the time of adieu
Bye!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ruth Walters 18 July 2009

Lovely little poems, so light and sweet. Ruth

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i loved the rhymes, rhythm and message.

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Delightful poems written with verve and flair. The rhyme and rhythm worked so well too! 10 Karin Anderson

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Nomthinjana Lusiti 21 July 2009

Nice and short and well well written. I like the rhythm in them.10

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Marla Smith 22 July 2009

Thoughtful writting. It is writen well.

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Rafique Farooqi 07 September 2009

very beautifully written poem.i am feeling garden and morning bliss around me

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Hiding Nothing 07 August 2009

Very good! ! ! ! The rhyme scheme was good aswell. It was beautifully worded.

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Noel Horlanda 07 August 2009

Petals of any flower in a garden is soft to the touch and look lovely when exposed to the gentle morning sun rays displaying their loveliness to honey hunters. I love the rhyming and were carefully chosen. Thumbs up.

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Henry Brown 06 August 2009

This poem is a rose among the thorns. I love your style 10+++++

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Rabi Anata 04 August 2009

Interesting, the life of a flower.: ] Very pretty +10

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