~ Pero Yo Te Saludo Madre ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ Pero Yo Te Saludo Madre ~

Rating: 5.0


Since there can be no cozy place
God devised womb in Mothers.

Since no first immunization can be synthesized
God created colostrums in Mothers.

Since no nutrient can be ever chemicalized
God sprung nectarine spring in Mother.

Since no freshener can be so allayer
God formulated corpusfreshener in Mothers.

Since no smile can be so captivating
God designed smiles in Mothers.

Since no toy gizmo ever give comfy
God crafted caresses in Mothers.

Since there is no better soother
God voxed berceuse in Mother.

Since no poet can portray attributes of human
God imaged unportrayable Mothers.

All hymn psalm
All leaves are paper
All sermons parables
All sages seers literati
Stumble bumble swag to
Portray greatness and
Brilliances of Mothers.

Holiest Whole
Wholesome Whole
You’re embodiment of.

Since God couldn’t be
Present everywhere
All Highest created Mothers.

I Ms. Nivedita
Try vainly
To portray You
Condone this self but.

Pero Yo Te Saludo Madre ~ O' Magnum Bonum
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[1] Pero Yo Te Saludo Madre [Spanish] ~ But I Salute You Mother.
[2] Magnum Bonum [Latin] ~ A Great Good.
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM

May be Poet as stays abroad feels the need and importance of her Mother and in 2 poems we found how she portrayed and glorified Mothers… Or may be from her Indian origin she feels Mother is greatest of all ‘Since God couldn’t be /Present everywhere/All Highest created Mothers’…bottom line of this poem Finally conclusion in Spanish and Latin. ‘Pero Yo Te Saludo Madre ~ O' Magnum Bonum’… just beauty to adore 10++ dr.sakti

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Amitabha Bagchi 26 May 2010

I thank the Poet for this beautiful poetry. Indeed glorifying Mother is present in all cults …even in prehistoric days. India is the ‘accoucheur-room’ for it. 10+ AB London

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Dr. V. Chakravorty 27 May 2010

[1] ‘Holiest Whole /Wholesome Whole… [2] O' Magnum Bonum ~ A Great Good…. [3] Pero Yo Te Saludo Madre [Spanish] ~ But I Salute You Mother. These set the gamut of Poetic and Morale octaves of this poetry in masterly way. Thanks for such a noble poem Ma’am 10++ Dr. V.

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‘I Ms. Nivedita Try vainly To portray You Condone this self but.’…ingenious write and envious humility…rightly dictioned…no one can fully portray Mothers …such brain yet not born…will never be born… 10++

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Prateep Sengupta 29 June 2010

With this poem the whole humanity is paying its humble tribute to the mother and the poem has become a universal salute.

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Ramesh Rai 10 July 2012

Pero Yo Te Saludo- Niv for such nice creation. Only God can imagine before creation that he shall have to take birth from the same womb. Sw.Vivekanand realised that womb from where all creatures are taking birth... Maa is a word which is common to all. Your endeavor is Magnum Bonum.10++++++++++++. Thanks for sharing. May God bless your talent be always gleaming.

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Matt Mooney 06 November 2010

Puts one into the frame of mind to ask oneself: 'Do we really fully understand how sacred a woman is who is the bearer of life, body and immortal soul, and God's great instrument of creation? '.10.

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Ramesh T A 03 November 2010

That is why Mother is the first known God to mankind! Your poems confirms this saying pretty clear!

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Bert Bell 10 October 2010

Hi Niv, I found this poem to be perfectly charming and poignant. I see it as a tribute to both God and motherhood. I love your word choices in this one, they are so fitting and they create such great visuals. You have a wonderful poetic mind.

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Dove Allen 22 September 2010

Ahhh...where would mankind be without the 'mother'! All children beneath their mother's heart are sacred! She is the 'instrument' through which humanity sings its eternal songs of life! She protects with her own essence...mind, body and soul! Accolades for such a beautiful testimony of how important the mother is!

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