Permanent Impression Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Permanent Impression

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The wind gives you proper hint
Signal that can leave behind imprint
Of permanent impression
If done or not done with obsession

How can we claim to be perfect?
When we are tempted with an act
We change our attitude often
And make bad impression soon

We are guided by immediate gain
That causes so much of pain
It may land you in problem
With consequences leading to troubles

We compromises to with our ideals
That shall always seem to be unreal
We may argue in favor with selfish interest
As that shall be considered as best

Life is not what it seems
You should always be perfect and keen
The object may not look near
But some angles should always form fear

Untruth shall never help in future
For time being it can cure
But with correction
It can improve upon action

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 April 2014

Very deep write 5 hours ago by Cynical Freak to Permanent impression

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 April 2014

The wind gives you proper hint Signal that can leave behind imprint

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 April 2014

Scott Ransopher likes this. Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! 7 hrs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 April 2014

Post Excellent JAX U 16 minutes ago You are a gifted poet...I would love you to read some of mine...not been writing it for long but would appreciate your comments.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 April 2014

Become a good person Nikki Parker16 minutes ago Inspiring Comment 0

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 April 2014

can improve upon action Bah Don Tmain17 minutes ago Makes a good read.... keep writing Comment 0

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 April 2014

good. Nate Reynolds17 minutes ago good job. i like it.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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