Perhaps Poem by GREENWOLFE 1962

Perhaps

Rating: 4.9


I took a trip last weekend
And you were at my side.
Perhaps, you never thought of me.
What feelings did I hide?

Perhaps, I should have spoken.
What soul did I ignore?
Were you the one I needed so
And lost forever more?

As I cannot know the truth,
It ran from me again.
I guess I'll journey out once more.
Perhaps, I'll see you then.

I'll need another placement.
Perhaps, one next to you.
The reader of this poemed soul,
The heart, it's written to.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Broken Peaces 18 June 2008

Did enjoy that had a nice flow and felt easy with it thanks Chris 10

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Patricia Gale 19 July 2008

Ah just perhaps, from the heart Green,

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Ted Sheridan 20 July 2008

Reads as good as any poem I've read....

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Evaughn Gray 21 July 2008

that was a really good poem i enjoyed reading it! Hazel G.E

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Shawn Johnson 21 July 2008

That's a really good poem..

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Cristy Upshaw 09 June 2009

simply charming. words of what could have been or could still be. perhaps, if... certain aspects were in order. perhaps, if... the stars were aligned accurately. words so thought provoking and daydreamy.

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Dee Daffodil 15 August 2008

We hide our feelings to protect our heart. Once hurt...once burned...with no desire to touch that fateful flame again... Hugs, Dee

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Chitra - 02 August 2008

wonderful luminous write

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Mark Nwagwu 22 July 2008

I'll need another placement Perhaps, one next to you. The reader of this poemed soul The heart it is written to. You want to be next to 'that' reader of this poemed soul, perhaps - you pour out your heart to this soul, perhaps it's the heart it is written to - yes indeed, that's a new placement. Perhaps. This left my eyes unblinking, searching. This is good, good, very good. When you open up your poem for voting, perhaps, so your soul won't be next to the wrong heart, you will get a 10 from me.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 22 July 2008

Very enigmatic expression...too good. sathya narayana

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