Perfectly Aligned Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Perfectly Aligned

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It had been long desire
Since I saw you and turned admirer
You remained in mind corner
With great luring offer

I wished to have you
And it was certainly proving true
You were occupying my mind
As you seemed to be very kind

You had nature’s charm
With no intension of causing harm
I was carried away by your fragrance
It was just a mater of chance

In dream too I held your hand
With feeling of close friend
You were surging closer
With intoxicating offer

I shall nurture your feeling
And take care almost willingly
You are welcome with whatever you have
I am almost for it and crave

We are perfectly aligned
Moved together and smiled
You are almost within reach
I feel great when nicely touch

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 February 2014

It had been long desire Since I saw you and turned admirer

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 February 2014

Perfectly Aligned Fay Ispahany3 minutes ago Dreams come true

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 February 2014

Great Tracy Bollinger1 minute ago All- encompassing attraction, driving force of life. How it acts out in life, great topic. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 February 2014

Post Very nice and soothing description of love Milton PaulLess than a minute ago The poem evokes two feelings - one of desire and intoxication, and the other of gentle rhythmic longing. Nice juxtaposition of feelings Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 February 2014

Preeti Sabhar.. I wished to have you And it was certainly proving true You were occupying my mind As you seemed to be very kind

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 February 2014

Preeti Sabhar.. I wished to have you And it was certainly proving true You were occupying my mind As you seemed to be very kind

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 February 2014

RAJENDRA ATHA.. SUPERB

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 February 2014

Tess Blooman Thank you just awesome

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 February 2014

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