Perfection Corrupts Poem by Rachel Slimm

Perfection Corrupts

Rating: 5.0


There once was a perfect li'l town,
where morals and standards were sound,
But the strong were protected,
and the weak just neglected,
don't you think that's the wrong way around?

17/01/08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Yes. A gem, and an unfortunately realistic one. t x

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LOVEFOOL Aka 09 May 2008

Nice poem with good sense funny as well Thanks Nik

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