Peices Of A Dying Body, A Failing Mind, And A Broken Heart Poem by Bob Sujdak

Peices Of A Dying Body, A Failing Mind, And A Broken Heart

Rating: 4.5


i am dying,
being ripped apart,
being stabbed,
wishing she had heart,
so she wouldnt be killing me

i am dying,
being ripped apart,
and all i need,
is a freind,
to hold me while i heal

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lt Feitosa 31 March 2009

Nice piece, a solid 9

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Barry A. Lanier 30 March 2009

Bob sounds like you need revival...go over and peruse my 'You can't conquer a rock' and for a martini...'A wondrous fall'......

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