Peeping Thru Poem by Neela Nath Das

Peeping Thru

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Peeping thru the window
of your poem, I come to
know how you progress
along the way of my heart.
It's very hard to avoid
the wind which sails my
ship of emotion to you.
So, I write to the sea
to take back the wind
to its own womb just
to give me peace of mind.
To care and not to share
will be a blessing for me.
I also stop staring
at the door of my puzzled
heart forever, and you know
expectation is a chronic
disease which must
be ended without
any open road ahead.

Monday, November 3, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love hurts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saheb Mohapatra 03 November 2014

beautiful and innovative........imagery..... Peeping Thru Peeping thru the window of your poem, I come to know how you progress along the way of my heart. It's very hard to avoid the wind which sails my ship of emotion to you.............great thoughts........thanks.

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Savita Tyagi 03 November 2014

This is a beautiful poem Neela. So innovative and creative in its style. I will read it again and again and merge my self in imagery. Keep the door open not only to care but to share!

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