! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Peddler Of Dreams- Tanka! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Mamta Agarwal

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Peddler Of Dreams- Tanka! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 2.7


Reach is up to sky:
Just plucks colours from rainbow;
Peddles on wayside.
Stll a child, tries not to yawn.
While some make rangoli at dawn.




Rangoli is a pattern with colours made in India on festive occasions in the courtyard or inside the house.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
AtreyaSarma Uppaluri 15 October 2009

Mamta, A colourful contrast, a beautiful observation...child's position is poignant. #10.

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Raj Nandy 11 October 2009

True! God's rangoli is really great, look at the rainbow, the sunrise and the sunset! 10! -Raj

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Lynda Robson 09 October 2009

Nice title for a colourful Tanka........thanks 10 Lynda xx

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 09 October 2009

a colorful haiku...nature's richness in colors cannot be sold

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