Peas Haiku Poem by Susy Evelyne

Peas Haiku

Rating: 4.5


Hidden in the pod
a line of small round new peas
wait to be counted

Monday, July 7, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The thrill of podding peas
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 07 July 2014

good writing, I like it, thanks.

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Khairul Ahsan 12 July 2018

Wonderful! 'The thrill of podding peas' has been so nicely described here!

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Saiom Shriver 22 September 2014

delightful....like sweet little quintuplets queued for birth

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Saiom Shriver 22 September 2014

delightful....like sweet little quintuplets queued for birth

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Stephen Katona 10 July 2014

Very funny! I will always think of these three lines when I open a pod of peas from now on.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 07 July 2014

a haiku wonderfully alive!

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