Adeline Foster

Rookie - 260 Points (Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD)

.Peacock Solo


Walking slowly, slowly down
A dusty country road,
The shadows seem to grasp at me
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  • Freshman - 1,205 Points Bill Cantrell (4/8/2014 4:54:00 PM)

    ...Tis but the light that plays among the trees! What I consider as one of the most skillfully crafted lines I have ever read. Thank you for posting. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 4,430 Points Daniel Brick (3/19/2014 9:27:00 PM)

    I had a very specific reaction to this poem: it was my memory of reading Freud's analysis of humor. He argued that there is a pile-up of psychic energy when an individual hears the build up of a joke, and when the punchline hits, that tension is suddenly released and laughter is the consequence. My description sounds hopelessly cerebral, but
    my experience when the peacock appears was exactly as Freud put it - tension relieved, laughter released. End of poem. No wasted words again. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 373 Points Louis Rams (7/19/2013 7:57:00 PM)

    there stood the peacock with its tail feathers all spread out
    screaming out to others what love is all about. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,557 Points Valerie Dohren (7/19/2013 2:50:00 PM)

    Brilliant Adeline, many things are scary when hidden in the shadows of night. Beautifully written of course. (Report) Reply

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