Peace Poem by Elena Sandu

Peace

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What stops the heart
of soldiers
to speak about own love?
I dared to try
one answer
may be the army's
gaining faults?
They twist
the people's need
for love
and switch toward
a single word:
! ! ! ' kill '! ! !
..the hardest thing
to do as job
for any human
being..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eric Cockrell 04 March 2012

war, the result of mankind's fears... and what we fear most are ourselves! your poem strikes the heart! good job!

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Bri Edwards 21 November 2014

i'm all for peace, though perhaps not at any cost. unfortunately i tend to think that there are times when war is the last deterrent to physical and/or mental bondage. there are too many people and too many who are willing to follow the lead/direction of warmongers****. [[ ***** war·mon·ger ˈwôrˌməNGɡər/ noun plural noun: war-mongers a sovereign or political leader or activist who encourages or advocates aggression or warfare toward other nations or groups. synonyms: militarist, hawk, jingoist, aggressor, belligerent the president's critics were quick to label him a warmonger ]] - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - if soldiers are against killing or are too bothered by it, there are options they have. not necessarily attractive options however. thanks for sharing. :) bri

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Hans Vr 15 April 2012

War is so cruel to anyone. If presidents, kings and prime ministers had to go with the troops and lead as old time generals their troops forward, we might see much less wars. It is hard to understand what soldiers have to go through and how they can cope. Let us all pray together for peace, peace and nothing but peace...

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 16 March 2012

Yes soldiers too, are victims of war....great poem Elena.

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Unwritten Soul 15 March 2012

I agree with everybody here, and yes to kill is very hardest thing.... if we have a weapon without kill people but to bomb the love and peace among people that will be better...but it such a dream for dream but for only can be dream eternally thanks! keep more love and peace for all world peace! ! ! _Unwritten Soul

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Gordon Tseng 05 March 2012

Soldiers are the victims of war, too.

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