Peace Poem by Ata Khan
Peace
The angel of death
in shock and awe
stands, perplexed
While terrorized
hysterically, a dog
looks around,
limping
falling
and rising
again
Bodies burning
turning coal
thick,
blackened
ghostlike smoke
unceasingly fueled
on flesh and
bone...
A village
last night
in ashen-ed dust
Children,
in park?
No signs of life
Yet, no vultures in sight
but the smoke …
Mankind
Hail to you
Does peace prevail?
Yes, in carnage
the Eternal
Peace...
Interesting! I like your imagery. Though you use few words for each line (like I favor in my own poetry) your efficiency is amazing!
ata this good i like it and our every day life we should all pusue peace
another sight`s look. unusual and impressive, but still phylosofical poem
Beautiful. Peace - the one thing that is most needed in this world right now. May I suggest you to read another one written along similar lines? It's called 'Smudge of Blood' (I didn't write it) . I read it today and it made me cry.
sad but very true poem. but i found that in this, if you rise above all adversity, you shall succeed in what you want.
Very sad fact of observing the innocent lives being destroyed by the unnatural sources of destructive powers. Peace is a beautiful dream to actualise among all the hoplessness of events around the globe. thanks for sharing your thoughts.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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