Path Of Love Poem by Pari (neetu)

Path Of Love

Rating: 4.5


The path Of Love
That We're Walking On
Obstacle Was And Will Come
But we've To Walk On.

I Know You And You Know Me
And People Was And Will Say About Us
But we've To Walk On.

I Have You And You Have Me
And May Some Wont Like It
But we've To Walk On.

If Life Wants To Take Our Test
And We Are Miles Apart, Don’t Worry
But we've To Walk On...

I Promise You And You Promise Me
And No Matter What Is There In Future
But we've To Walk On.

May Be We Are Far From Each other
And Things Are Not In Our Hands
But we've To Walk On.

I Take Your Hand And You Take Mine
And Together Will Change Our Fate
But we've To Walk On.

I Love You And You Love Me
And Lies Have Been Said, Truth have Been Seen
But we've To Walk On.

When We'll Be Together And Holding On
And know that we've Walked That Path
And we are Strong And Still Going On...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abdul Rahman 12 October 2008

I liked ur poem very much- i think u said what many lovers think in their mind. Actually big girls should not cry-The caption is... just like that i got it. and u didn't say whether u liked my poem or not? . ok va. u gave comments for only one of my poem. where are the others. I hope u will reply.

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Abdul Rahman 11 October 2008

Simple the Good one. I read your poem first after submitting mine today. I hope u will read mine and give some comments. I always want some negative comments to improve myself. Will you neetu? -Abdul Rahman.

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Pari (neetu) 11 October 2008

dedicated to my love...'SJ' M Sorrieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee....

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Rohan Parekh 11 October 2008

nice work meri gudiya rani ;) .....bt bahut senti hai: P...mauhzz

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