Past (Senryu) Poem by Govind Ramakrishnan

Past (Senryu)



let me take you down
this river of nostalgia;
in a paper boat

© 2016

Tuesday, July 26, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Guru Kothandaraman 26 July 2016

The past is water under the bridge. So I love your paper boat depiction, the past is history and the paper boat should not get to its destination.

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Kelly Kurt 26 July 2016

Ah, the paper boat will dissolve before reaching its destination

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Mike Cohen 26 July 2016

Your titles are as creative as your poems. Well done.

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Gil Highlander 26 July 2016

Vivid imagination comes to bear, transported in a paper boat. A perfect 10.

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Stephen Park 26 July 2016

Superb senryu, thanks for taking me down my past, all in a flash!

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