let me take you down
this river of nostalgia;
in a paper boat
© 2016
Vivid imagination comes to bear, transported in a paper boat. A perfect 10.
Superb senryu, thanks for taking me down my past, all in a flash!
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The past is water under the bridge. So I love your paper boat depiction, the past is history and the paper boat should not get to its destination.