Past, Present, Future Poem by Jeremy Bailey

Past, Present, Future

Rating: 5.0


To my unkown i meet the one.
Talking by note to take a stand.
Till the day where i come up
And take her by the hand.

There are things I wish to be known
But hidden these things must be
For if they are uncovered
Destruction we will see.

One day the 'her' and 'I' will be a 'we'
With no fear from those who see
Fully aware of what we are
Allowing our future to go far.


Fire Frog - 1/27/09

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 02 February 2009

This makes me wonder what the secret is. Unless I miss something. This is a short and simple poem with a mystery. I'm not sure I like that, but it is what it is. I thought the writing was OK. GW62

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