~ Past ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.
~ Past ~
~ PAST ~
Ms. Nivedita.
10.11.09.
UK
Past
Beginingless
Secondless
Matchless
Ageless
Timeless
Fathomless
Speechless
Immortal
Eternal why
O’ You?
Civilization
History
Religion
Love
Hate
Agony
Ecstasy
Battles
Hatred
Vengeance
Store in Your
Limitless cache why
O’ Past?
Psalm
Prayer
Poem
Chant
Music store why
O’You?
Present
Fleets
Nimbles
Spryly
Coalesce
In you why
O’ Past?
You
Consume
Guttle
Present
Future why
O You?
Past
Half of
Time
You
Womb in
Future Present
Become entirety
You’re not
Inanimate
Incognizant
Unaware
Unconscious.
Knower
Of everything
Seer
Sage
Ubiquitous
In allness, fullness.
Mute
Lulled
Voiceless why
O You?
Hey Past
Give them
Speech
Teach alphabets
Compose symphony
Bach Beethoven
In New Format
Be eloquent again.
O’ Sage Past
Jingle quiescent harp
Kibosh not my abode
Bring vibe
Flutter fibril
In showering bounty
With new age
Tagore
Beatles
Deon
MJ
Thro’
Whispering notes
I’ll Listen
I’ll Listen
I’ll Listen.
O’ Knower Past
Why not write
New age
Iliad Ramanayana
Bible Quran
Faust Gardener?
I’ll Read
I’ll Read
I’ll Read
Keep events not
Petrified
Hibernated
Mute
Mummified
O Past.
Thy excellence
Thy glory story
Thy euphony cacophony
Psalm chant Universale
Booze blotto me in
Rhapsodic richness.
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The structure of the poem is very different, but i like it, for the poem its self I cannot derive a definite theme or meaning. Forgive me, but I was lost throughout the poem. Your friend Lynn
Hi Nivedita, I like this poem. Each line is a balancing element to strengthen the subject line, with originality.
The structure of the poem is different, liked it nice imagination well written thank you for sharing.....
O’ Sage Past Jingle quiescent harp Kibosh not my abode Bring vibe Flutter fibril In showering bounty With new age Tagore Beatles Deon MJ Thro’ Whispering notes I’ll Listen I’ll Listen I’ll Listen. the best part.........y've explained plenty in few words, loved it. it's one of those dramatic n artisitc pieces.10+++.
Man will never learn past present and future your poem cries a plea..too busy to hear man too busy blowing each other up...10/10 for concerning write regards
You have captured, with all these discriptive words the past in a very unusual way. A good write.
Very interesting poem, Niv. It's vital for us to understand the past if we are to move forward into a progressive furture.
Everything is so true...i lost in the melody created by u! ...oh glad to read this piece! yeah now we are in present time...soon this moment will be 'past time' but when somebody read this again it will recall and bring this to present again, yet it sound like this poem will never old and eternal....at least before it deleted from poem hunter..hope not
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/18/2024 12:26:05 AM # 1.0.0.1119
one thing that i woud like to higlight is the image of eternal and divine entity. the poem to me it seems all about a god -the yesterday's glory, today's manifestation, tomorrow's union yet all the same and will never change...just the god of was, is, will be.... nice