Udiah (witness to Yah)

Rookie - 33 Points (1959 / USA)

Passing On - Poem by Udiah (witness to Yah)

To be absent from the body
Is to be present with the Lord
The dust returns to earth
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Comments about Passing On by Udiah (witness to Yah)

  • Veteran Poet - 1,599 Points Kay Staley (3/26/2015 9:45:00 AM)

    The flow of the poem is disrupted by the egregious amount of syllables in the last line. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 131 Points Kirti Sharma (5/1/2014 3:46:00 AM)

    wow..... words are nicely used....
    good poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alam Saj M.n (11/9/2013 3:22:00 AM)

    nice one... wish u would continue it and make it a better one (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mahmuod Shahidi (9/5/2012 10:04:00 AM)

    nice simple explanation of death (Report) Reply








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