Neela Nath

Parting Talk - Poem by Neela Nath

May be it's my parting talk.
My mails as the fallen
leaves of Fall will stay
dead or cremated under
your thousand alive loves!
My spine, I divided to
teach me a lesson- - - - - - -
One goes to you,
another to my conscious-self!
I'll never claim,
the lost path.
I'll never have aim,
to show my wrath!
I'll never tread,
your by-lane,
where my road is
blocked by a wall!
Never to wear
the crown of false
I swear!

Comments about Parting Talk by Neela Nath

  • Rookie - 363 Points David Wood (4/11/2013 8:20:00 AM)

    Oh my parting soul tells a tale. A good write. (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 724 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (4/4/2013 12:46:00 PM)

    An aggrieved soul's parting talk touches the heart ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,720 Points Neela Nath (4/3/2013 9:31:00 AM)

    Thanks Soul. You got my grief. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,353 Points Unwritten Soul (4/2/2013 11:33:00 AM)

    A good write, at sometimes we may feel that friends and the close ones really kill our sad and bad times, other times we feel they are joyful_Soul (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 1, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 2, 2013

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