Parting Poem by Zero empty

Parting

Rating: 4.3


Friends, Brothers, bid me farewell.
Good bye allow me to depart.

As gentle streams we had come together.
Flown for a time like a mighty river.
Taking up rocks of experience
converting them to pebbles of joy.

On the sill I leave the keys to my door.
I leave the room to you.
In return, i only ask for a smile.
Your acceptance, the key to run the remaining mile.

White light has entered the prism.
Reminding our doodles of dark sarcasm.
I have received more than i could give.
Keeping aside what i deserve, Please forgive.

Golden memories, I shall not bury
They travel along on a ferry
Rivers part before reaching the sea
Seeds get dispersed from the mother tree
(so let it be)
you all shall linger on have some fun.
Remember when you too reach the sea we shall be one

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 17 August 2013

Oh, how wonderful a poem this is! The parting note of a babbling brook. Seeds get dispersed from the mother tree (so let it be) A great philosophical observation.

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Trisha Sengupta 14 August 2013

Nice presentation of your thought really liked it!

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Arabella Picken 14 August 2013

This is a really nice poem. Just make sure all the 'i' are in capital

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Paul Brookes 13 August 2013

The river of life flows like the ribbon of friendship and shared memories A very deft well crafted deep poem as deep as the sea. Thanks for Sharing 10/10 BB : O)

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Vishal Sharma 13 August 2013

thats awesome just like my poems lol

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