..Pardon? Poem by Elena Sandu

..Pardon?

Rating: 4.5


What is that sound?
The subway train?
The people's rush?
No, those are very quiet
comparing with the silent shouts
of hearts bursting of love!
Between cracks, I hear the warmest voice:
Don't keep inside: let out, share!
Then, comes an echo..
.. from here, and there..

-Pardon! ? !
-How?
-When?
-To whom?
and..where?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rekha Mandagere 18 April 2011

Dear friend, what a great philosophy of life you have captured in these great lines! Pardoning makes life relaxed and it is a solution for ever haunting evil- hateredness. I really relaxed while reading this beautiful poem.Marks 10 Rekhamandagere

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 25 May 2012

Exciting poem Elena my friend..loved it... Siya_! !

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Elena.... if linguists frown not I hold this name out to tyrants to armies with daggers of madness drawn Elena... I shall whisper to disease and hunger and mistrust and with these offering I shall seek to become barrier (though meek) amidst strong and weak a living breathing apology for sins I never did Elena.....

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Hamid Negah 11 August 2012

what a beautiful poem, Elena.

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Dutendra Chamling 22 November 2015

Beautiful poem..................!

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Amitava Sur 14 April 2014

very nice poem centering a word Pardon ..... who will pardon whom and hundred of questions balloon.

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Kanav Justa 25 January 2014

a lovely write, , , , , liked it, ,

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Heather Wilkins 27 July 2013

a good write Elena enjoyed the read

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Ramesh Rai 23 July 2013

-Pardon! ? ! -How? -When? -To whom? and..where? but always nice

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