Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (11/15/2008 6:22:00 PM)
When all haze that clouds our minds eradicated, clearer nights would beckon and shimmer, entertaining jubilant life.Excellent writes Tsira! |
PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE (9/4/2008 1:37:00 PM)
and bright days wil begin...10 |
Christopher Savin (9/4/2008 3:40:00 AM)
Tsira you astound with your insight, a real feeling of inner self, portrayed with a golden pen Thankyou Chris 10 Please keep yourself and family safe in these troubled times |
Adel Jons (6/30/2008 3:39:00 AM)
Oh! When i have read this poem i feel pleasure, becouse i remember that night in my city
L O L |
Catherine Rica Cosico (6/26/2008 8:22:00 AM)
perceptive in its own way...A unique work with such brilliance in its simplicity...
Cate |
Kesav Easwaran (6/23/2008 10:15:00 AM)
'...you will not get tired there is no time...' this line is an insightful interpolation...a beauty of its own...10 |
Rema Prasanna (6/22/2008 12:04:00 PM)
And you eternally awake.
And eternally you will unsatisfied...
And your dream will be live.......
finishing lines of this poem gives a definite thought, a well balanced one
A very good composition |