Paradox Poem by Gregory Wm. Gunn

Paradox

Rating: 4.3


Despair nipped at our hearts,
we the blue children
of the growing season, long green stalks rising
in savoury fields.

Vitality has deserted us,
polished gems of the first water
swallowed by the Sun
and surface smiles.

Along the edge of Summer
we chewed on the softest sprigs
of sleep, myths gathered us
in on the brow of Night's
primeval forest.

Our tiredness grew restless,
it fashioned velvet shrouds,
double-breasted jackets
of weariness and ragged
woollen caps for our slumberless sojourns
in the wake of the dawn.

Lustrous after life
these short strides
from long-suffering
and extended habits.

In salt coated palms
(Fate's plans are blueprinted
in frost) we cup weighty heads
of past lovers. They perish
upon our guiltless fingertips.

The distant grey dove's
voice, beyond his heart and wings,
somewhere else in salvation
with bleak outlook, searches
memory's skylight
to sustain yet more shortened
gasps of Time.




01/24/08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elenore Elizabeth 04 March 2008

'polished gems of the first water' beautiful line my dear your poem can catch even the coldest hearts

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Tsira Goge 15 February 2008

Do not wait in it for a life laurel a diadem, do not like live classics... It too paradox but the ruthless fact... The kindest regards... Tsira

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Scarlett Treat 24 January 2008

I very much agree with Tara here, that you have such an amazing talent with word structure, and that fourth stanza is beautiful....evoking feelings I didn't know were there until I read what you wrote. Wonderful writing, just awesome! !

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For some (or no) reason, there is always a particular stanza in your pieces that utterly stands out to me and grips me. This time it is the fourth. Why, why, why can't I ever put together such words? ! t x

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Gregory Wm. Gunn

Gregory Wm. Gunn

Windsor, On., Canada
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