Paradise Poem by Free Faller

Paradise

Rating: 5.0


Far away places
A typical neverland
Paradise spaces
The ocean and warm sand
Never seen faces
Not placed on a map
Violence is shaded
Just give God your hand

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ronald Smith 30 April 2006

Most excellent poem my friend.

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Vega Star 27 April 2006

It's great to see you writing again.

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Elya Thorn 27 April 2006

Short, strong, beautiful, hopeful! A very very good piece of work! ! ! ~~Elya Thorn~~

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Sandra Fowler 27 April 2006

What a charming and reassuring write. I love the last line. Warm regards, Sandra

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