Parachute Hearts Poem by Sanjukta Nag

Parachute Hearts

Rating: 5.0


We were floating on the summit of the sky
Amongst the clouds of imagination…
When the time came to step down to the reality
I offered myself
And opened my heart like a parachute,
So that you could land without harm
Swimming through the finest wind of love…
But your heart was a parachute that never opened
And I fell and fell and fell,
Like a leaf falls from the topmost branch of a tree
Knowing the earth is its deathbed…

Wednesday, September 2, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: heartbreak
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 02 September 2015

Outstanding poem............Great imagery......Nice plot with artistic writing.........Loved it.....10

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 02 September 2015

Creativity at its best, reader's privilege

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 02 September 2015

Wow impressive n creative poem on falling in love! Brilliant metaphorical twist! Parachuting words of fantasy n reality. Kudos. Pls do coment my latest poem too, on sir Kalam.

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