Papyrus Poem by Mubeen Sadhika

perfect work, keep it up.10+++

I like this one a lot Mubeen

Excellent! 'stupefied in flora' well done 10+

the kin in binary relation the methods to be traced so as immortal manure stupefied in flora..........it is beatiofully rhymed poem with clear vision..i liked the idea and poem.....10

Very evocative. Stirs up a lot of images and experiences.

The theme is not for the faint brain but with binary connection can fathom out what you are saying and history is as such to study how we went wrong...good poem but I think with your talent plain english would suffice regards

I need to study this at an ease! With the problems we have in posting, sometimes and due to some web coughs, I need to write down a long respnse and, giving experience, I might loose it!

A really wonderful idea that has been said in good verses. Yes. You have the capacity to go into the heart of every element of this grand Nature. This insight is often missing in majority of poets and people around us. What to do? Keep going!

Papyrus records from the past, help our understanding now. A excellent write.

Papyrus is like the human skin on this poem. Regardless of time passed or past experiences once itched to the memory its there for eternity. A scent of a flower or a sound of some sort always manages to awaken past time and bring forth past into present. Loved ittttttt…thanks 10+++++