! ! ...Paper Flower Poem by Seema Aarella

! ! ...Paper Flower

Rating: 3.4


Within his heart his desire
Struggles to break out
From the chains of silence
Tries to outgrow the
Gather of clichéd words
To declare its presence
With a passionate discourse

Her desire frail and brittle
Like a paper flower
Wrought by inhibition
Colourless and scentless
Fails to muse his eyes
But trembles in ecstasy
Just by the touch of his breath

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ahmad Shiddiqi 14 March 2009

very nice! even flower can be sent by sense of belonging and caring. dear, friend. if time permits, please read and comment it on page 4. thank you.and also other new ones on page 1 and 2.

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he and her..and teir differences in a situation told very well

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Sadiqullah Khan 09 March 2009

Yes, some paper flowers would also work.10

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