Chenou Liu


Paper Boat Tanka


Version I:

a paper boat
made from early drafts
of my poem
sails down the river...
moonlit memories


version II:

a paper boat
made from early drafts
of my poem
sails down the river
of moonlit memories


Version III:

a paper boat
made from early drafts
of my poem
sails down the river...
of moonlit memories


note: there are three different river images portrayed in these versions due to their structural differences

Submitted: Friday, June 28, 2013
Edited: Saturday, June 29, 2013
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