Painted Warriors Poem by Pirate Love Magic Man

Painted Warriors

Rating: 4.2


I stand beside,
A angle with copper wings
Painted warriors we fight
A battle of endless dispare
Every ennemy a ghost
Of unseen thoughts
Painted warriors never fallen
Soon to be free
Of this land of missory
Our victories fordged in bone
Never to be alone
Together we fly
Painted warriors of the sky

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
DELETED NOW 03 July 2008

A angle with copper wings...my ideas never seem to be stolen.(irony) lol if u get that lol I loved it u beat me to the punch....tho...

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*Trusting You* 02 January 2009

Every ennemy a ghost Of unseen thoughts great lines. Stacey is so right this has great description. Dream Maker

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Stacey Watts 17 September 2008

Very good poem.. You have a flair for description..

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Pied Piper Berry 06 September 2008

This poem is really good.... I love the imagery.

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Wael Moreicheh 16 July 2008

LIFE AND WARS AND PRETTY POEMS YOU MAY BE FIGHT WORLD OF PEACE UNLESS WORLD OF AN ANGELS WAEL MOREICHEH

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(: God's Wild Child :) 03 July 2008

kool poem. i like it. good job.

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