In my head images fo you spin around as each day I'm kept from talk to you creeps by. Feeling sick from lonliness. My eyes never free from tears. I suffer in utter silence wishing I could hear your voice and feel your arms around me embracing me. I feel so alone without you. My destiny could forever be changed by you. I want to hear you say my name but that pleasure has been taken from me. Will this inconvenient break put problems into our relationship. I wish we had been smarter. Oh my love I need you but will you still be here for me when I am free from this punishment that was thrust upon me? I am without love at this point for my love I cannot hear you saying that you love me. My family thinks I have problems. I am broken and alone. I am depressed and stressed. worrieed and frustrated all because I have no one to hold or show love to becasue I am totally and one hundred percent in trouble all because I wanted to be with you and now I must suffer. I...need...you.
You got my vote because you showed true feelings, not in a poem's format, but nevertheless, your true feelings came out. Like I said in some of my poems' IN THE PURSUIT OF HAPPINESS', 'A LOVE'S GAME', 'IF BY ANY CHANCE', please, Rae, keep it up, 'Love is Love by any given name', Love and Peace, Romeo
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You did a great job revealing true feelings. Putting emotion on paper and bringing out thoughts is not easy. Nice work. Poetry needs these kinda feelings to attract the reader. This poem is full of sight and honesty. Debbie