Pain (Cinquain) Poem by Cynthia Buhain-baello

Pain (Cinquain)



Constant
Pouring rain breaks
A hard rock to pieces
Pain, like rain, when poured out daily
Breaks hearts.








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'Cinquain' consists of five lines in 2-4-6-8-2 syllables arrangement,
poetic in form (imagery, metaphor, etc.) , may not rhyme or have rhythm, but consistent in content, texture, and flow.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 08 January 2010

Pain is like a prescription that has not been yet refilled, you feel not relief until it is done, talk to your pharmacist to speed it up...And you will see the final result...well penned, Cynthia, only time will tell...patience, Que sera, sera...What will be, will be, let the music play, meanwhile... Keep it up! Love and Peace...Romeo

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Cynthia Buhain-baello

Cynthia Buhain-baello

Manila, Philippines
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