Pain Poem by Jacob Hill

Pain

Rating: 4.3


Pain that resides
Deep in your soul

Overwhelms your heart
Which it has stole

And leaves behind no trace at all
Just rips it out and watches you fall

The dripping blood flows and drains
Hoping to end all of these pains

Dying within you feel all alone
Knowing now you’re on your own

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shadow Girl 03 May 2011

Hey. The more poetry you read the more you realise you are not on your own. Great imagery and emotion. Check out some of my poems if you like.

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KylieTheBest(: - 03 May 2011

This is a really good poem

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