Pain Poem by brittney keith

Pain

Rating: 4.1


Pain
Pain over here pain over there
Pain in my heart pain in my soul
Pain in my mind
Pain in my skin pain in my bones

Pain being caused left and right
Pain being caused till the heart bleeds red
Pain being carsed till the skin and bones rip
Pain being caused till you break into tears

Pain at school
Pain at home
Pain in my head pain in my heart
Pain in my mind pain in my soul

Pain happening is my sleep
Pain happening in my thoughts
Pain happening when Im alone
Pain happening in the shower in my room in my bed in my house where Im all alone
Pain happening every hour every minute every second of my life

Pain caused by anger and hate
Pain caused by hurt
Pain caused by greed
Pain caused by sorrow and depresion
Pain caused by grief and confusion

Pain caused by your family and friends
Pain caused by the world
Pain caused by the people you love

Pain driving me crazy
Causing me to take pills till it fills up my veins
I go to sleep never to wake up and see the light
The light that will end my pain for good!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jay Bigger 05 March 2008

i like your poems alot cause you express your feelings, thats why i started writing mine, i found it easy to express emotions, i enjoy your style of writing good luck

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Emo Seb 10 March 2008

hey...awesome! ! Seb

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Khushal Ahmed 16 May 2012

pain is life life is nil without it pain give depth to life pain is storm but storm is nice nicer than idolness it gives depth to soul pain help realise our fault even then pain is curse hated the most

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Jt Kaniarz 26 September 2011

Heartbreaking and tragic I think many of us can relate to

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Mona Martinez 06 March 2009

wow, nicely written. love the way you started and ended. pain comes from everywhere but, the difference is the way you let it affect you. you can let it get the best of you or you can let the pain in the world make you stronger. it always your choice. great job! ! !

17 2 Reply

wow that was awesome! ! really loved it you expressed yourself so well i could feel it. thanx

14 4 Reply
Shawn Dixon 07 April 2008

i like ur poem its ausome keep tryin

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