P.S. Poem by Bragg Adocio

P.S.

Rating: 2.7


1 times
2 times the moon.
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circumnavigating my thoughts like punches thrown by the hands of a digital clock.
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Seems like a contradiction how my metafiction seems to leave you in the dark.
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I don't kno how you can even keep up w/ me.
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Do you keep rockets on your mind like astronauts?
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I can't
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Understand
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How you can hav the tyme to just
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And Listen to the rhythm of my offbeat heart.
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Do you call me in seance, or via telegrams sent on the back of speeding trams?
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What if your wordz nevr met me?
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And what of mine to you?
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Would we just end communication by land without attempting to breach the sea or sky! ? Givin up bc the land is too treacherous and let our voices die! ? Can I cross my heart or stick a needle in my eye! ? Bc I swear that my voice is one that carries, and I got you if you want to fly.
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I can't seem to
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These thoughts of you
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Running tracks through my mind like nike sponsored weave!
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Checking me out, it's starting to creep me out, but I cnt imagine looking back and you just aren't there.
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Being you.
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Being beautiful.
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Making me hate you for being so far away.
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Being there for me rather than here for me.
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I cnt stand it!
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Don't you understand! ?
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You're making me crazy!
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I cnt take another second!
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But I sure as hell will if that's what it takes to be w/ you.
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Patience is not a virtue, it's an annoying necessity.
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I cnt see u
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I cnt hear u
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I cnt feel u
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I cnt live w/ you.
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but there is no doubt in my mind that I cnt live w/o you.
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P.S.
I Love You

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C. Keskuela 02 February 2010

I'm not quite sure about the style, but I like the raw conflict of emotions this represents.

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