(p) 17 (Sufiyana) You Have Gone Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

(p) 17 (Sufiyana) You Have Gone

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You have gone
But You are here with me
I have abosrbed the fragrance of Your being
Your presence is inside me.My soul can feel it
Sometimes it permeates outside.Others can feel it too
Sometimes it condenses in a dropp of beauty dancing inside me
Sometimes it opiates me and gently rolls me in a land of gossamer dreams
Sometimes it races up to my heart and bursts into a song and i write it down

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geoff Warden 14 June 2007

Add my vote to this one young songstess, this verse sings of the must fervent notes and is flowing like a stream unto its' river....

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Effulgent imagery abounds this beautiful work, young lady! ...Smoooooth, and so very quelling...Very solid crafting, T.O. FjR

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Effulgent imagery abounds this beautiful work, young lady! ...Smoooooth, and so very quelling...Very solid crafting, T.O. FjR

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