Overcast On My Heart Poem by Michel Antoine

Overcast On My Heart

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Overcast On My Heart__
Michael Anthony 4/7/12

It's overcast on my heart tonight, forever holding you at bay.
Never to let you in again, my love is getting further away.
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It was a winter of romance;
Heating those night by your embrace,
We were aglow amidst the embers
Making love by the fireplace

You completed my every sentence;
Fulfilling my dreams.
You gave me hope to the questions,
So fear-filled they seemed.

The frost now turns to moss
And the embers went cold.
You needed me less,
And our love went on hold.

I want to believe that nothing's changed,
Smiling away from me.
As words replace your touch
As promises replace your passion
The nights, they grow so long
And the day's light so short.
As you lie in bed up north,
And I'm here, so we're apart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 11 April 2012

Life is a circle that clearly involves changes! Nothing remains the same and must a new step forward! The hardest part of a sad ending is start all over again a new relationship with somebody new when vivid memories remain intact! This is a well crafted and poignant write that clearly shows your deep feelings and poetic talent! I am very sure that we all go through that sad and painful situation one time or another in our lives but we always overcome it! Thank you for sharing this thought provoking write and keep it up! 10+++ God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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