Over The Roof Top Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Over The Roof Top

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I keep on saying and believe
"The world is for us to live"
With fellow brethren
To share the concern

Life is full of tragedy
Yet heaven is granted by almighty
We are all different kind of flowers
Believe in different religion as followers

Sometimes forget to share the teachings
Sometimes resort to unethical cleansing
Where from all destructive ideas emerge?
Just needed a chance to see people and urge

Believe in whoever you think is your faith
Final destination is named as death
There no discrimination is made
When you depart from the scene or fade

I need to use no brain
It may give more pain
Irrelevant things may pinch more
Some of the natural things are to be adopted therefore

I wish to be called child of god
Real one and not wishing to commit any kind of fraud
Just wish happiness for self and people around
Real joy is there but never cared to be found

I may be forgiven for any sin
If that was committed unseen
Let divine power guide me to be aloof
As single man watch towards sky over the roof

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 January 2013

I keep on saying and believe “The world is for us to live” With fellow brethren To share the concern

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 January 2013

Good Claudia I Adams29 minutes ago I love it Comment +1 Great poem

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 January 2013

Steve-o Ayers32 minutes ago i love it Comment +1 its good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 January 2013

Taylor Mohn34 minutes ago its good, but the pulse of the whole thing screwed me up a little bit sometimes Comment +1 Kind of deep

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 January 2013

Enigmatic Mahogany LETTING DIVINE POWER GUIDE ME! THANKS SO MUCH FOR XPRESSING YOURSELF! 2 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 January 2013

Carol Kate Chard-Hargett Compassionate and wise words, Hasmukh. May peace be with you as with all. 6 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 January 2013

Carol Kate Chard-Hargett Compassionate and wise words, Hasmukh. May peace be with you as with all. 6 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 January 2013

Heather Burns, R K Chowdary Jasti and Jane Lynahan Karklin like this. Heather Burns peace- - - - - love- - -blessings 5 hours ago · Edited · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 January 2013

Cynthia Smith32 minutes ago The rhythm did not click with me...but I can understand it for the most part.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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