Over The Brige Poem by Stephanie Souter

Over The Brige

Rating: 5.0


A cracked TV screen
But the picture still clean

Draped in black
She swore never to go back

Infected fingernails
slide across beaten rails

She swallows the cold air
Knowing there is pleanty to share

Sky drips ice
Killing all nice

Ending the show
she lets herself go

Dangle above a moutain top
Shortly before your heart dose drop

The wind on her face
Inpact ripping the lace

Slip along with the swift river
One degree colder a shiver

Blood mixed with water
Kills her unborn daughter

She knows she is free
Out for nobody to see

Done with it all
She hopes you had a ball........

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kranthi Pothineni 08 March 2009

Once again nice analogy used along with a fine structure to ponder on...the feel of this poem is really good...you had carried that fell until the end...Great work

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