Outside My Window Poem by john o'connell

Outside My Window

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outside my window
the blur of a november fog
hastens up eternal ghosts, hades-like,
from gardens bleeding with pungent odours.
there are the remembrances of sins
unexcitably gone to dismal wastes
and waters of stale and frothy scum.

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Terence George Craddock 06 February 2010

powerful imagery as biting as senses it engages

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Terence George Craddock 06 February 2010

powerful imagery as biting as senses it engages

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Ian Bowen 06 February 2010

John, excellent piece of wrining. You conjure up a good atmosphere in so few words.10/10 Regards, Ian

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Limerick, Ireland
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