Outside Looking In Poem by Liam Hughes

Outside Looking In



Outside looking in
I find my head begin to spin
And somewhere in the distance
I can sense their resistance
Will they see me standing there
Or will I avoid the stare
I see the face of evil creatures
It stands out in their features
But loving people run
To find they’re no longer in the sun
The cold gets in their soul
Then they’re no longer whole

But it’s a place they can hide
From the things that reside
As long as they abide
To the rules they have inside

Inside looking out
I find I’m swallowed by my doubt
Where is this place I seek
The outcomes looking bleak
Because there’s something in my head
That makes me begin to dread
But I can’t tell from the vision
If I made the right decision
But I’m sure I’m soon to know
Where I’m meant to go
If the darkness in my soul
Doesn't return the things I stole

But it’s a place they can hide
From the things that reside
As long as they abide
To the rules they have inside

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Soumita Sarkar 16 September 2013

Good write....................I invite u to read my lines if possible...Thanks.

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Liam Hughes

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Bedfordshire, UK
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