Out Of Practice Poem by Kelley Larsen

Out Of Practice

Rating: 5.0


I'm out of practice
talking,
other than thinking out loud
and that's
:
:
Crazy-
Still,
all the crazies
think they're
geniuses, they're
minds so
:
:
Deep-
Well,
Not all, baby.
I'm water in a glass,
cold as iced sun,
still as the rocks
we once walked upon.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello 06 December 2008

Very fine. Sometimes somebody manages to tell that natural set reflects intimate life. It's true.

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Sonny Rainshine 06 December 2008

Fine image there: cold as iced sun. Cheers.

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